Computer-Free Day

2/5/2014

By Blake R.

It was normal day and I was about to beat the last level of Mario Brothers when the power went out. It was the worst and I didn’t save it so I had to play board games and they make me bored. No wonder why they call them board games.

My mom was away and my annoying older brother was watching me and I decided to go no computer day. It was a computer free day dum dum dum I said dum dum dum oh ah!

6 Comments

Bryce link

4/1/2014 02:21:29 am

good story, but it a bit of a fixer-upper: some grammar mistakes. i love how you back-talk your big bro! keep it up!

Nolan

4/2/2014 02:14:45 am

This reminds me of the fifth grade play.

Jaiden C.

4/2/2014 04:13:33 am

Great story, but the "dum dum dum" part seemed a bit unclear. Try to clarify that part.

GabeZ

4/2/2014 04:20:04 am

Nice I can definetly relate to your story

Trevor S

4/2/2014 04:20:48 am

How did you survive a computer free day I dont understand!

Hallek

4/4/2014 03:32:44 am

you were great and i love that song

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